Passion's Killing Floor

Even though the only reason you're reading this novel is because I'm behind you with a knife at your throat doesn't mean you can't enjoy it.

What is a penny, but a mere fragment of reality?-Deimos

"I suppose my flaw is being a bit obsessive. The way to cure it is to get what I want."-Deimos "I'm not happy, I need to find some sunshine."-Adela "I ...

Sounds like a very hopeful story, maybe a little sad, with a very beautiful message to it. The Dream King

What annoys me about the casting is that it's blatantly obvious three of them are wearing wigs and it looks so incredibly unnatural. There's a right way to wear a ...

Wow, this really tugs at my heart. Good job.

Jasper's back story was...interesting. It helped me understand and picture him better, but like I said, Eclipse seemed very forced. Perhaps it will have a larger significance in the next ...

4/10 Doesn't really capture my interest and sounds overly complicated. Something I want to write based off a dream I had.: A something like love story that takes place in ...

I write on the computer, usually aiming for a finished chapter every weekend. In class I usually scribble down ideas and scenes so that I can incorporate them in once ...

For a Pessimist I'm Pretty Optimistic - Paramore

A bit confusing, but it has great imagery. I can picture most of it in my head.

This has a great message and ryhmes well. Keep up the good work. :D Try using more punctuation to help make it a little clearer.

[pre]Fire Lighter It’s not like I was surprised by what had happened. I’d been expecting it. Nonetheless, I don’t know what’s going on in the world anymore. It’s been weeks ...

Holy Shnaz, this is great. I can really relate, and despite the fantasy elements it's very realistic. Definately a fun read.

It's quite lovely, good job. It's mysterious and makes me wonder why you must leave.